We are learning to use present participles in our writing.
Dodging through Waipa, Hunter ran with the ball. Waiting for him to pass the ball to me, I ran next to him. Smack! He threw the ball. I caught it. I clenched on tightly.
Dodging through Waipa, Hunter ran with the ball. Waiting for him to pass the ball to me, I ran next to him. Smack! He threw the ball. I caught it. I clenched on tightly.
I turned to face the try line. It was beckoning me to score a try. I sped down to the try line, darting through Waipa’s team. My heart was pounding as fast as the pistons from a monster racer. My breath was disappearing dangerously and I needed to stop and have a breather but, if I did, I would get touched and wouldn’t get the try.
I kept going and drifted through with the ball still clenched in my hands and scored.
I kept going and drifted through with the ball still clenched in my hands and scored.“We won We won!” We all shouted in each other’s faces. We all went and made a circle and cheered for Waipa.
